Commentary meme

[snorkackcatcher]

OK, I'll chance this bit of memeage and see what happens -- if anyone would like me to do one of those commentary thingies on any of my oneshots, post a comment here to say which and I'll have a go.

(Not NTLJ though. Partly because it's so long, but mostly because it would be hard to do without giving things away. :D)

Comments

[lazy-neutrino.livejournal.com]

Not even one chapter of NLTJ?

[dharmavati.livejournal.com]

OMG! NTLJ!

:D

Just Kkidding. I'd actually like to see "A Really Bad Idea".

[snorkackcatcher]

Depends on the chapter. Even the prologue has one point I'd like to comment on but that would be a complete giveaway if I actually did. :D

[snorkackcatcher]

Ah, OK. I'm quite fond of that because it was easy to write. :)

[snorkackcatcher]

Here you go. :)

[lazy-neutrino.livejournal.com]

Chapter 22, please.

Or if not that, then 21. The way you mesh your story and the book in the 20-21-22 section is wonderful. It gave me a jolt when you merged the two storylines, because I was so swept away with yours that I'd forgotten about GoF completely.

[lazy-neutrino.livejournal.com]

Oh, and - even though I'm not really on LJ atm because work is so horrendous it's terrifying (I'm not even here right now: I'm marking 260 A level questions for tomorrow) expect an email from me at the weekend, and I jolly well hope you haven't posted all your Christmas cards yet, because you'll just have to go out to the post office again.

Evanesco!

*vanishes*

[snorkackcatcher]

Thank you!

Erm, probably have to be 21 though -- I just took a look, and an honest commentary on 22 would both refer to things later in the story that are only just appearing even at Chamber of Secrets, let alone FictionAlley, and also involve True Confessions about where I've been completely winging it. :)

[snorkackcatcher]

Here it is then. :) (Chapter 21.)